Just a Curtain Review

October 9, 2013 Reviews 0 ★★★

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Just a Curtain ReviewJust a Curtain by J.L. Lawson
on 12/31/2012
Genres: Science Fiction
Format: eBook
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three-stars

Just A Curtain chronicles the remarkable life and
achievements of Dashiel Drummond and the capable group of people he
gathers around him to make a change for the better in the world in which
he finds himself. This is a coming of age story; orphaned at sixteen, he rises through the angst of
adolescence to the challenge of fulfilling the promise of his
potential--from ranch hand and welder to the builder of starships...

Just A Curtain is the remarkable, fast-paced gateway to the grander saga of the
journey toward true self-realization recorded in J. L. Lawson's other
works: The Donkey and The Wall trilogy and The Curious Voyages of the
Anna Virginia Saga.

I went into this book knowing nothing of the other series of which this is supposed to be a prequel.

The book starts off introducing us to Dashiel Drummond, who is the son of a wealthy couple who happen to own an international billion dollar corporation. Dash’s parents get killed on a trip and he is left to take over his family’s ranch at a young age of 16. Soon after, he takes over the family businesses after his parents’ partners bow out.

Dash seems to be extraordinarily gifted and smart, which is not unknown of in novels as many go with this theme (Artemis Fowl being my favorite). Dash not only runs the business well but diversifies it into all kind of industries and new technologies. He works for the betterment of mankind with new tech in medical, transportation, etc. which eventually leads to star ships. Dash is a great boss, treats everyone in his life well, and really succeeds in everything he goes for.

The book starts off pretty slow and meanders in his family’s ranch. He has a girl in his life, but he never actually marries her…I’ll get to that in a second. Detailing the running of the ranch, including hiring a family to oversee part of it was quite interesting. Then he decides to build a boat (something he planned with his mother before she died), and the book gets stuck here for quite a while detailing all the steps of building a boat. Yes, I don’t care about what it takes to build a boat. We finally get out of that mess and the book starts taking off when Dash starts getting into his business ventures.

We’re plotting along here covering Dash’ relationships, subordinates, and amazing technologies and business ventures for quite a while. This is the part of the book I really enjoyed. Then out of the blue (about 60%) we’re introduced to Dash’ wife… Not the highschool girl from the beginning (she just works for him now)…no he ended up marrying an alien, and a cat alien at that. We’re not even given any info on meeting this new alien race on an alien planet or anything, although obviously we had space travel at this point. I tuned out after this and just skimmed the book to finish which covered more relationships, how to properly introduce the aliens to the populace, etc.

Overall, I did enjoy a lot of the book. I think it could have done better without the boat building part, with a more gradual introduction to the aliens, Dash actually marrying the childhood friend he grew up with, and splitting the book into two parts as it was just too long and really the space part probably ought to be in its own book. I did find the business ventures and technologies to be interesting, and there were a bunch of really well-developed characters in the novel. I’m sure the novel would be more meaningful for readers who have read the other series with these characters.

three-stars

About J.L. Lawson

I am a father, a grandfather and a “Came-to-Writing-Professionally-Late-in-Life” kinda guy. After rewarding careers as a Land Planner, Standards Engineer, Technical Writer/Graphic Designer, and as an Educator (High School and College Literature/Composition) I settled down at the laptop and began storytelling for a living. My wife and I live in the Cross-timbers country of North Texas and spend as much time seeing this amazing country, its National Parks and Forests, as we can manage.

My own journey has taken me both far afield and deep within. It is a journey, no doubt, similar in nature to many seekers’ travels who have come before me. However, an unconditional commitment to the work is the trait of only a handful of those who set their aim very high indeed, and then to find a guide who knows the way through this rarely known land, is without question what all others have equally sought. Some gave up the search, some became distracted by the lure of other interests, many became satisfied with the knowledge they had already gleaned from their initial searches. There is, in the end, only so much gold.

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